I like the slides/slurs that are in this song. The ritardando in the middle of the song was cool the fact that it returnded to the original tempo is what made it stick out to me (a ritardando is a music term for slowing the tempo). I would definitely it is in the dance genre. The filter added a nice touch. I think their needed to be a bit more thud in the kick. It just seemed like it was lacking a bit.
I think it could be better it just seems really repetitive and empty. You should add another counter melody to go with the lead bass and synth. I dont really like the hi-hat. I like the synth choices. Very nice job modding the synth. Nice job on the slurs/slides The arp was ok but could be better it just sonded a bit too choppy. The beat should have a bit more variation.
Overall very good
I don't know what a counter melody is...
But thanks for the review.
Nice job with the mastering. It does not lack highs like some of you songs that you have done insted you used your voice alone to create that emotional feeling for the listeners. I like this the most over the other tracks you have done. The piano could have been a bit louder tho.
Keep up the great work!!!
definitely a change but its awsome
This is a change from your usual work but I like it. The bells sounded very nice in this song it fit it perfect. The piano sounded great did you use FL Keys because if you did very good EQ work because in my opinon FL Keys dosent even come close to a real pianos sound thats why I use soundfonts for that stuff. The soundfonts I use have sound samples of real instuments. But any how this flowed very nicely with the white noise with the filter was great for transitions. Great Job. I like this song a lot!!!!!!!!!
Dude this is sweet!!!!!!!!!!
This is awsome. The synth at 44 seconds sounded cool whatever you did to make it sound like that it was sweet. The only problems I found was that it is way too short and the kick did not have enough bottom to it and could have been louder for a dance song in my opinion.
Dude this is an awsome DnB song. What did you use for the bass it was kind of cool sounding. Hmmmmmm sounds like the 3X OSC for the lead is that right. I think the kicks should have been a little bit louder but not really a big deal.
Keep up the good work!!!
Their was some wrong notes. Some of them where not with the tempr try using the FL studio metronome. HiHats and Claps need to be louder and use different samples the one you used are not very good. Chang the kick sample as well. Add some reverb to the beat.
thanks but this was actually my second song ever lol, i made 2 other remixes of this, come check em out =]
Nice job it is quite unique in a good way I have never heard a guy sing it.
Once Again Nice Job
I honestly think that some guys should also do a cover of the song, its good for a change =P
Thanks for the review. =]
Well wonderful voice but it sounds like you need to add a bit more highs to the vocals brighten them up even if it is a dark or sad song you should sing it with a lot of emotion to get that sad effect instead of making it sound like it by droping the highs off with an EQ or filter. Makes them a bit muffled. The music is perfectly mastered with great quality.
Needs better mastering the vocals were dull and had no brightness to them.
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